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2010-07-17 23:26:46|  分类: 诗歌篇 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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                                          四十年前,

                                  我们远离可爱的家乡,

                                                从祖国的四面八方,    

                                     奔向陕南的安康。

                                     开启了人生之旅,

                                     穿上了绿色军装。

                                     燃烧着革命激情,

                                     挥舞着建设臂膀。   

                                    那是怎样的情景啊, 

                                    大山有如戈壁荒凉,

                                    一不怕苦歌声嘹亮。

                                    那是怎样的年代啊,

                                    千军万马人拉肩扛,

                                    二不怕死斗志昂扬。

                                         为了襄渝线,

                                 我们迸发着青春的火花。

                                         一条新动脉,     

                                  融入了军人忠诚的血浆。

                                           不能忘啊,

                                     那风餐露宿的战场。

                                          晨风坠夕阳,

                                          晓日伴月光。

                                           常想起啊,

                                     那艰难困苦的悲壮。

                                         炎夏挥汗如雨,

                                           寒冬一身霜。

                                             不能忘啊,

                                      那牺牲战友的脸庞,

                                           新坟立山岗,

                                           泪水湿衣裳。

                                             常想起啊,

                                      那建成通车的欢畅,

                                            汽笛惊天地,

                                            锣鼓圆梦想。    

                                      热血男儿志在四方,

                                        但也有儿女情长,

                                         皎洁的月光下,

                                        我们思念着故乡,

                                      那里有牵挂的父母,

                                        还有眷念的姑娘。

                                        中华儿女多奇志,

                                        不爱红装爱武装,

                                         劳碌的日子里,

                                      泯不灭怀春的遐想,

                                  心中的白马王子在何方。

                                        那个特殊的年代,

                                    一切以阶级斗争为纲。

                                          人性折断翅膀,

                                        爱情关上了门窗。

                                      与天奋斗无尚荣光,

                                      与地奋斗慷慨激昂,

                                      与人奋斗天天向上,

                                     成为人生进步的土壤。

                                         命运在这里沉淀,

                                         青春在这里交响。

 

 

                                              四十年后,

                                      我们从天南海北奔向

                                              第二故乡,

                                              相聚安康。

                                        战友重逢喜气洋洋,

                                        遥想当年涕泪流淌。

                                           牵起你的手臂,

                                           温热我的胸膛。

                                           从你的皱纹里,

                                      读出当年的器宇轩昂。

                                           从你的华发里,

                                      感受到你的饱经风霜。

                                           整整四十年啊,

                                      身体虽然不那么硬朗,

                                           脚步也有些踉跄,

                                           但我们的战友情,

                                        厚重如山深似海洋。

                                               此刻我们,

                                             举杯庆团聚,

                                         唱出军人的豪爽,

                                         醉出战友的酣畅。

                                               此时我们,

                                             祝福暖心房。

                                          道出彼此的牵挂,

                                          说出深情的向往。

                                          聊一聊过去的事,

                                        让记忆散发出芬香。

                                        诉一诉别后的衷肠,

                                          让友情蒸蒸日上。

                                        亲一亲脚下的土地,

                                          让乡情源远流长。

                                        看一看崭新的安康,

                                          让未来壮丽辉煌。

                                               我们无悔,

                                       我们是共和国的脊梁,

                                               意志如钢。

                                               我们无愧,

                                       这一身子弟兵的军装,

                                               英姿飒爽。

                                               我们自豪,

                                          铁道兵开路先锋,

                                               卫戍边疆。

                                               我们骄傲,

                                        人民军队举世无双,

                                               威震八方。

                                             如今的我们,

                                           已经两鬓如霜,

                                           但军人的本色,

                                     永远是人生前进的力量。

                                             如今的我们,

                                           已经年过花甲,

                                          但终于党的承诺,

                                    永远是分量最重的军功章。

                                            光荣手上传承,

                                          激情在心里飞扬!

                                          

 

                                          2010年7月17日   《有话就说诗评》

  

  

                                  

 

   

                                                                                

                                             

                                 

                                        

                                       

        

                                  

         

   

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